Steev The Purple Raccoon

Hey! I thought that this was a very interesting story, but there was one part that confused me. I saw a light shine on in the room and looked up, ...

Ro! I love this song! It seems like a song that you would absentmindedly sing to your love, with the words not really flowing right, but makes sense. Because with ...

Thank you! I will correct the strange parts. I'm a REALLY slow typer, and on the appleworks it looks way longer. I couldn't find a type of grin for Slei, ...

When Reg was directing two Belgians towards the town, Ayrshire, he saw movement out of the corner of his eye. He glanced over, and saw a sickly thin man running ...

We of happy, We of sad. We of despair, And we of glad. We were brought into this world by a cruel and broken hand. In my dream, there were ...

Wow Magg! This is really good! This was three years ago?! I like how you used strong words, like what BornToShop said. This is really an awesome piece.

The circus I worked for was unlike any other I had ever seen. Life was so surprising there. Well, ever since I had watched my parents be brutally murdered. I ...

The circus that I worked at was unlike any other I had ever seen. I had worked there since I was thirteen. Ever since I had watched my parents be ...

This is a very interesting story, and I think you should write some more(if you haven't already). There was one think that I didn't understand. [quote]No, something was different. I ...

Owie, when you write quotes, you need to put "" between them. EX: "What If I'm Not The Good Guy?" ~Stephanie Meyer

All of you guys have really good tips. Thank you for reading my poem. Trikky, what you said about the whole plucking of the petals makes it sound better. I ...

Thank you so much! This was my first post, and I came up with this poem like, 20 minutes ago. Thanks again!

Wow, Yaoi much? Jk this is really good. I like how you captured Mello. This really was like what I see on Deviantart, but unlike any others I have seen. ...

wow aliya!!!! like maggie said, you should really send this to a publisher. and what a comment YOUR WRITING KICKS STEPHENIE MEYERS ASS! !!!!!!!!!!! espesially coming from maggz!!!

If Life gave you lemons, What would you do with them? Would you make lemonade? Would you throw them? If Life gave you love, What would you do? Would you ...